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her breakdown

"Whatttttt"

tanya almost screamed as everyone around her came close to her as if wanted to be assured that she's alright ...

"I'm sorry to say mrs agnihotri ur parents are no more"

the unknown person on the other side ... Making tanya numb at her place ... There was shock, a flicker of grief, maybe guilt but most of all ... Concern and stunned ... Actually too stunned to speak ... Her knees suddenly felt too heavy too carry her weight ... They were throbbing and wobbly like jelly which can give up on her anytime ... And soon her knees met ground as she fell down... And tears slowly filled her eyes ...

(Translation - Tanya's world seemed to freeze in that moment. The words echoed in her mind again and again, each repetition heavier than the last: "your parents are no more..."

Her body felt disconnected, her chest tightening as if the air itself had betrayed her. Every sound around her became distant-muffled murmurs, footsteps, voices trying to reach her-but she couldn't respond. She was suspended between disbelief and a crushing reality.

Tears blurred her vision as they streamed down her face, hot and relentless, and her hands instinctively clutched at the floor, as if holding onto something tangible could stop the earth from slipping beneath her. Her knees trembled uncontrollably, giving way as gravity finally claimed her, leaving her crumpled on the ground.

For a moment, nothing existed except the raw, hollow ache inside her chest, a grief so immense it threatened to swallow her whole. Her mind raced, searching for answers, for some impossibility that could undo this cruel truth. But there was nothing. Only the echo of the devastating words, leaving her numb, stunned, and utterly alone.)

"B blue ... Bacha" jay quickly knelt down beside her taking phone from her hand quickly but before he could say something further the phone was already cut and was dead ... All agnihotri brothers were surrounding her ...

(Translation - "B... Blue... Bacha," Jay quickly knelt beside her, snatching the phone from her hand, but before he could say anything further, the call had already ended and the phone was dead. All the Agnihotri brothers surrounded her.)

"B bhabhs kya hua .. aap aise sab thik to haina ... Aap ro kyu rhi hai kya hua ... Kisine kaha kya kuch ..."

(Translation -"B... Bhabhs, what happened... you're okay, right? Why are you crying? What happened... did someone say something...?")

Tahir said being concerned ...

"Maa kuch to boliye kya hua"

(Translation - "Maa, please say something... what happened?")

Jaemin was another to ask curious but more then that he was worried for her ... Looking at her expressions... It was clear she is struggling to express herself and not in state of explaining the situation...

Naksh understanding her expressions understood and asked while hugging her

(Translation - Jaemin was the next to ask, curious but more than that, worried for her... Looking at her expressions, it was clear she was struggling to express herself and wasn't in a state to explain the situation.

Naksh, understanding her expressions, asked while hugging her.)

"Is it about ur parents tanu...?"

Tears welled up in her eyes and a tear without her knowledge fell from her eyes ... As she slowly look at him trying to say something... Anything ... But no words came out from her mouth ...

She was having difficulty to breathe ... Jay's eyes welled up in tears looking at his blue ... His precious bacha in this state ... He can't even imagine what she's even going through ...

Jay hugged her quickly and tightly enough to make her melt in his arms ... While he whispered softly controlling his own tears ...

(Translation - Tears welled up in her eyes, and without her realizing, one slipped down her cheek. She slowly looked at him, trying to say something... anything... but no words came out.

She was struggling to breathe. Jay's eyes filled with tears as he looked at his blue, his precious bacha in this state. He couldn't even begin to imagine what she was going through.

Jay hugged her quickly and tightly, enough to make her melt in his arms, while whispering softly, trying to control his own tears.)

"Just cry out bacha... Ik it must be heavy for u whatever ur dealing with right now ... Ur handling it very well ... But jab humare saath ho ukr u don't have to bottle up ur emotions and feelings ... Ur safe with us bacha ... Just let it out"

As hriday finished to speak ... Something broke inside her and she screamed in pain ... In grief ... Hiding herself in Jay's arms ...

(Translation - As Hriday finished speaking... something inside her shattered, and she screamed in pain, overwhelmed by grief, burying herself completely in Jay's arms.)

"Aaaaaaa.... J jay ... P papa ... M mumma ...w wo ... M m mujhe c chh ... Ch hod ke c ch chale g gye ... I I failed jay ... I I failed in being their daughter ... W wo ... U unhe m mai e ek a akhiri b baar d dekh bhi nhi p paayi ... K kitni u unlucky h hu ... K kyu s sab mujhe h hi c chhod chhodke c chale j jate hai ... M mai k kya I itni buri hu ... U unhe k kahiye naa w wo wapis a aajaye... M mai s sab karungi ... J jo wo kahenge ... P plzz plzz ... Unhe w wapis ... B bula ... L lijiye naa"

(Translation - "Aaaaaa... Jโ€‘Jay... Pโ€‘Papa... Mโ€‘Mumma... thโ€‘they... thโ€‘they left me...

I... I failed, Jay... I failed as their daughter...

I... I couldn't even see them one last time...

How unlucky am I... why does everyone keep leaving me... one by one...

Am I really that bad...?

Please... please tell them to come back... I'll do everything...

I'll do whatever they ask...

Please... bring them back... please...")

She sobbed hard and cried while screaming in pain and crying silently yet her whole body shook and trembled with her sobs... She can't even express how much and how deeply she's feeling the pain in her chest ... And mostly in her heart ...

Everyone controlled their tears within their eyes looking at her condition ... As yash caressed her hairs softly ...

(Translation - She sobbed violently, crying out in pain while silently weeping, her whole body shaking and trembling with each sob... She couldn't even put into words the depth of the pain tearing through her chest... and most of all, through her heart.

Everyone held back their own tears, watching her in that state... as Yash gently caressed her hair.)

"Meri pyaari gudiya ... Parents ke jaane ka dukh hum se behter kon samjh sakta hai.. haa jiske parents bachmei hi unhe chhodke chale gye ho ... Wo kaise rehte hai ... Kaise bade hote hai hum zyda kon jaan sakta hai ... Humne bhi khoye hai apne maa baap ... Hum samjhte hai ..."

(Translation - "My precious doll... who can understand the pain of losing parents better than us? Yes-the ones whose parents left them in childhood... who grew up without them. Who could understand that life better than us? We too have lost our parents... we understand.")

Saagar too came slowly too her and tried to comfort her ... But because of crying soo much and soo hard she became too exhausted to stay conscious and she felt dizzy and got unconscious making everyone panic ...

(Translation - Saagar also came slowly toward her and tried to comfort her... but because she had cried so much and so hard, she became completely exhausted. Dizziness washed over her, her strength gave up, and she lost consciousness-making everyone panic.)

"Tanu ... Bacha utho ankhe kholo"

(Translation - "Tanu... bacha, wake up. Open your eyes.")

Naksh tapped her cheeks softly ...

"Jay carry her and let's go home mai dekhta hu... She will be fine ... She's just too exhausted ..."

(Translation - "Jay... carry her, let's go home. I'll take care of her... she'll be fine. She's just too exhausted...")

Jay nodded and picked her up in his arms and nodded looking them all and went from there with her ... And went to lift and press the button ... As the door of the lift opened ...

He quickly rushed in and pressed the basement button and look at her unconscious state once again and kissed her forehead softly with closed eyes as a tear fell from his eyes and fell on her cheek slowly...

As the basement came the door of the lift opened and he rushed out with her immediately and went to his car and took out the car keys from his pocket and pressed lock open button and opened the backdoor of the car and made her lay softly and very carefully and closed the door quickly and came to his side and open the driver door and sit on his place and closed the door and started to engine ...

Which roared like anything and started to drive quickly after coming out from its basement ... And all the way he was praying within himself that she should be fine ... Just open her eyes once ... And he promise that they will handle everything together ...

(Translation - Jay gently held her in his arms, the weight of her unconscious form heavy yet precious to him. His heart pounded as he pressed the lift button, watching the doors slide open. Without hesitation, he carried her inside, pressing the basement button, his eyes softening as he saw her pale, fragile face. A single tear escaped and traced down her cheek as he kissed her forehead tenderly, silently praying for her to wake.

As the lift reached the basement, he hurried out with her and moved toward his car. He carefully laid her down on the backseat, making sure every movement was gentle, almost reverent, before closing the door softly. Sliding into the driver's seat, he started the engine, the roar echoing his racing thoughts.

With every turn of the wheels, his mind silently begged her to open her eyes. "Please... just wake up. I promise, we'll face everything together. Nothing will happen to you. I'll protect you. I swear."

Every second on the road felt like an eternity, every breath heavy with worry, yet his grip on her was unwavering-a silent vow that he would never let her face this world alone.)

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At agnihotri mansion

Nearly 6 pm

They both reached the mansion and he came out from his seat and quickly went to backdoor opening it and pull her out from the seat very carefully and took her in his arms again and closed the backdoor of the car and locked the car quickly and went inside their mansion ...

And quickly came to their room and open the door and made her lay properly on their fluffy yet soft bed ... And sit beside her holding her hand softly in his ...

(Translation - They both reached the mansion, and he got out of his seat, quickly went to the back door, opened it, and carefully lifted her out of the car seat, holding her in his arms again. He closed the car door and locked it swiftly before heading inside the mansion.

He rushed to their room, opened the door, and gently laid her down on their soft, fluffy bed. Sitting beside her, he held her hand tenderly in his.)

"Blue ... Bacha plzz apni ankhe kholo ... Ek baar ke liye plzz ... Ull be fine ok ... Tumhare dhani sa hai na ... Tumhe kuch nhi hone denge ..."

(Translation - "Blue... bacha, please open your eyes... just once, please. You'll be fine, okay? Your dhani sa is here... I won't let anything happen to you.")

He kissed her forehead softly and caressed her head softly ... And sleep like that as his lil finger intertwined with her Lil finger ...

Soon after 10 mins all the agnihotri brothers came in quickly ... And saagar came in first in their room and came near to tanya and hold her wrist checking her pulse ...

(Translation - He kissed her forehead softly and gently stroked her hair... falling asleep like that, his little finger intertwined with hers.

About ten minutes later, all the Agnihotri brothers rushed into the room. Saagar was the first to reach Tanya's side, holding her wrist carefully and checking her pulse.)

"Normal hai dw ... Exhaustion ke wajah se aur itna sab hua uski wajah se she is unconscious dw ... I'll give her injection... 4-5 ghanto mei hosh aajayega"

(Translation - "She's normal, dw... She's unconscious due to exhaustion and everything that happened. I'll give her an injection... She'll regain consciousness in 4-5 hours.")

Saagar said like a doc but still there was care, warmth , and concern for tanya ... Like an elder brother ... He soon gave her injection softly and very carefully with a thoroughly sanitized and cleaned injection needle injected in syringe ...

And cleaned that area carefully with a detol dipped cotton and then throw that cotton in dustbin ...

(Translation - Saagar spoke like a doctor, but his words were full of care, warmth, and concern for Tanya... just like an elder brother would show. He gently prepared a thoroughly sanitized syringe, carefully administered the injection, and then cleaned the area meticulously with a cotton ball dipped in Dettol before disposing of it properly in the dustbin.)

"Pressure mat daalna iske dimaag mei to explain the situation ... We already know the situation of hers ... Thik hai"

(Translation - "Don't pressure her to explain the situation in her mind... We already understand what she's going through... Okay?")

Saagar explained everything softly and being concerned ... Knowing how much his brother is suffering looking at her in this condition...

Jay nodded with slight teary eyes and jaemin knelt beside him and wiped his tears softly ...

(Translation - Saagar explained everything gently, full of concern, fully aware of how much his brother was hurting seeing her in this state.

Jay nodded, his eyes glistening with unshed tears, while Jaemin knelt beside him, softly wiping them away.)

"Dw bhai... maa jaldi thik ho jayegi"

(Translation - "Don't worry, brother... Maa will be fine soon.")

He said in his low yet trying to be strong in voice ... And hugged him as they all leave them both alone in their room ...

(Translation - He spoke in a low voice, trying to sound strong, and hugged him tightly as everyone else left, giving them both some privacy in the room.)


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